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LOST IN THE WOODS

“Wow I wonder what the woods are like?” Kylie says to Nicki.

Kylie and Nicki were both 18 but Kylie was older. They grew up together for 18 years.They were close friends, nearly sisters.Nothing could come between them.

The two girls Kylie and Nicki went travelling and as they were travelling they  found these woods,.They both decided to camp there.So the girls walked through the woods and found a clearing to camp on.So the girls set up there their camp site. When they finished setting up their campsite they both went for a walk.

As they were walking the weather  got darker with mist rising from the night and a foggy sky with a bright clear white moon.

So the girls grabbed their torches and walked around trying to get over their fears of the darkness.  While they were walking they talked about their memories growing up and found sticks and wood for there their fire they could make. As the night grew darker and darker, they thought about heading back but……

Roar! Roar! “Ahhhhhh what is that?”they both screamed.“Bears” Kylie screamed.As the trees swished and swayed they seen saw a sign saying bears.They both looked at each other in shock.‘‘We’re in a bears area” Nicki screamed. “Shhh! ” Kylie says to Nicki. So Kylie and Nicki stood there puffing their breath and shivering with goosebumps coming among their body.While standing there, the bears come came out from beyond the trees, so the girls ran and ran and ran.After running they find found a clearing.

After all that running they decided to stay in the clearing.

They were lucky to stay in that clearing because they had berry trees for them to eat.“Lets light a fire, with those sticks,”Kylie said.

After lighting the fire the girls were wide awake eating berries staying out of sight.As morning hits, the sun is drifting in the bright blue sky.“Its morning!” They say.As the girls get walking trying to find their way out of these horror woods.They come beyond the trees and find their way out,“We’re out,” they scream.As they come out of those horror woods they found their path home and talked about what happened when they stayed at the woods.

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